2025 新高考I卷小作文

作文要求和分值：

第一节(满分15分)

66. 假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教Jenny 提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给Jenny写一封邮件，内容包括：

(1)你的选择；

(2)说明理由。

注意：

(1)写作词数应为80个左右；

(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Dear Jenny,

I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper.

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Yours,

Li Hua

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学生作文原文转文本：
Dear Jenny

Delighted to know it will be a new column to our English newspaper. As fas as I concerned concerned, “Fun at my school” is more suitable. Here are my reasons.

The column themed “Fun at my school” obtains an increasing number of advantages. First of all, it fosters students’ passions  to share their positive things. at school, which contributing them to become more joyful and releasive their pressure. What’s more, the content which the column involve in is usually the positive things at school, which not does it only conveies the. positive mind but also shows. our shool’s positive environment.

Hopefully, my advice will be. applied. I’m really looking forward to seeing new column come to life!

Yours
Li Hua.

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第一遍修改后：

Dear Jenny,

I am delighted to hear about the new column for our English newspaper. As far as I am concerned, “Fun at My School” is more suitable. Here are my reasons.

The column themed “Fun at My School” has several advantages. First, it fosters students’ passion for sharing positive experiences at school, which contributes to making them more joyful and relieving their pressure. Moreover, the content featured in the column typically highlights positive aspects of school life, which not only conveys a positive mindset but also showcases our school’s positive environment.

I hope my suggestion is considered. I am really looking forward to seeing the new column come to life!

Yours,

Li Hua.

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第二遍修改后

Dear Jenny,

I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper. The column themed “Fun at My School” is a great choice. Here are my reasons.

First, it fosters students’ passion for sharing positive experiences at school, which contributes to making them more joyful and reducing their pressure. Moreover, the content typically highlights uplifting aspects of school life, not only conveying an optimistic mindset but also showcasing our school’s vibrant environment. Last but not least, if each of us offers one short heartwarming story, the whole set will turn into a warm memory book that we can open again long after we leave school.

Thank you for thinking about this idea. I’d be delighted to see it happen.

Yours,

Li Hua.