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I rushed home and immedately handed my parents my sore card and note with “PLEASE” witnessing my perfect perform in exam, a brilliant smile blossomed like a flower on their faces with a strong surge of delight passing across their eyes. Dad didn’t forget the promise he had made, so he announced. “Let’s go to visit grandparents tomorrow.” The next day, we arrived after a long-distant journey. When grandparents noticed we arrived. they were so excited that they hugged me and asked me about my daily life. After the tightly dinner, we talked about the memory, such as the big long gardens and a big multi-story house with a wave of laughter in th air. But the happy time had wrung. We had to leave after a week.
I saw my mom had tears in her eyes when leaving them. May be it will be a long time before saw them agant. Thinking these things. I coultn’t help to burst into tears like my mom. Seeing the scene, my grandparents hugged and clapped our bake. “Don’t be sad, if you’re miss us, you can call for or you can come to visit us more often. my grandpa said with a tiny smile, We promised we would come every year, and said goodbye. At that moment, the love between my family warmed us like the warm golden sunlight,
flooding through the window, it can’t fade away as the time passing by What should we do is companying our families more.
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I rushed home and immediately handed my parents my score card and note with “PLEASE” written on it, witnessing my perfect performance in the exam. A brilliant smile blossomed like a flower on their faces, with a strong surge of delight washing over their eyes. Dad did not forget the promise he had made, so he announced, “Let us go to visit grandparents tomorrow.” The next day, after a long journey, we arrived. When grandparents had noticed our arrival, they were so excited that they hugged me and asked about my daily life. After the tender dinner, we talked about memories, such as the big long gardens and the large multi-story house, all accompanied by a wave of laughter in the air. But the happy time had flown. We had to leave after a week.

I saw my mother had tears in her eyes when leaving them. Perhaps it would be a long time before I saw them again. Thinking of these things, I could not help but burst into tears like my mother. Seeing the scene, my grandparents hugged and clapped our backs. “Do not be sad. If you miss us, you can call us, or you can come to visit more often,” my grandfather said with a gentle smile. We promised we would come every year and then said goodbye. At that moment, the love between my family warmed us like the warm golden sunlight flooding through the window, a feeling that cannot fade as time passes by. What we should do is spend more time with our families.