5.21 小作文

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It is my hornor to stand for our group to indicate our opinion of the “Weekend Schedule”.

As far as we concerned we found schedule useful but identified some problems. On the hand, the activities and the time were be matched accurately, which is helpful for on us to do these activities regularly.

On the other hand, some time of the activities is unsuitable, such as “Wash up” obtains I hour. We feel the timing for certain activities is sometimes unsuitable the allocated for wash up” is too long.

Hopefully, our opinion will be of helpful to revise the schedule.

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It is my honor to represent our group in sharing our views on the “Weekend Schedule.”

As far as we are concerned, we find the schedule useful but have identified some issues. On the one hand, the activities and their times are accurately matched, which helps us complete them regularly.

On the other hand, the timing for certain activities is sometimes unsuitable; for instance, the allocated time for “Wash up”—one hour—is too long.

We hope our feedback will be helpful in revising the schedule.