2025 新II卷 大作文

=========2025年 新II卷 原题==========

47. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

“What is your name? ” is a question most frequently asked when people meet for the first time. But for me, it was the first challenge I encountered as an international student in Ireland.

The pronunciation system of the Chinese language is quite different from that of English. For native speakers of English, some Chinese words are rather difficult to pronounce. My given name Qiuyu (秋雨), for instance, happened to be a great challenge for many of them. Every time I gave a self-introduction, I had to explain how to pronounce my name at least five times, yet they still could not say it the way I did.

Once in a lecture, the professor tried repeating my name after me over and over in front of thirty classmates. I really did not know whether I should continue correcting him or simply drop the matter. I feared that my classmates might grow tired of my efforts or even lose patience with me. After all, I did care about how others would think of me. I realized that if I didn’t stop, the entire lecture would be ruined. “It’s okay, professor,” I shrugged (耸肩). The awkward moment ended with the class erupting into laughter. I forced a smile, unsure how to respond further.

After that incident, I stopped acting as a “Chinese teacher.” Instead of correcting others when they were struggling to pronounce my name, I just smiled and nodded approvingly. This approach spared me the discomfort of having to over-explain. However, I soon found that by doing so, I might be losing something more important: the opportunity to share a small part of my cultural identity.

注意：

(1) 续写词数应为150个左右；

(2) 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

In a class discussion, I was invited to explain the meaning of my name.

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Many of my classmates got interested and came up to me after class.

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=================作文改为文本=========

In a class discussion, I was invited to explain the meaning of my name. With my heart pounded voilently, I stepped to the stage. I hesitated for a moment. “My name is Qinyu, I started with butterflies in my stomach” which means ‘autumn rain’ in Chinese.” I paused for a second. “It not only means the natural rain, but also stands for the positive result which the autumn rains bring to us, ouch as the beautiful sencenery various vegetables and the cool weather that contribute us to fade away the heat of the summer. “Then I continued with a tiny smile.” The reason why my parents gave me the name is that they wished I can be a helpful man just like the autumn rain.” Hearing my words. my classmates was in silence, and then boosted into thunderous applause, instead of being embarrassed. I felt honored about my name.

Many of my classmates got interested and came up to me after class. They approached me with a smile blossomed like a flower on their face. Some of them asked me how to pronounce my name accurately, while others requested me to teach Chinese for them. Even a classmate requested me to give her a Chinese name. With Laughter echoing in the air, we were excited about talking about the Chinese
culture not just the names but the festival. customs and so on. At the moment, I felt the Chinese culture obtained a powerful strenth.

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根据文本出的AI优化建议：

During a class discussion, I was invited to explain the meaning of my name. With my heart pounding violently, I approached the front of the classroom. After a brief hesitation, I began with butterflies in my stomach, “My name is Qinyu, which means ‘autumn rain’ in Chinese.” I paused for a moment. “It refers not only to the natural rain itself, but also to the positive results autumn rain brings us, such as the beautiful scenery, abundant harvests, and cool weather that help us gradually fade away the summer heat.” Then, with a small smile, I added, “My parents chose this name because they wished me to be a helpful person, just like the autumn rain.” After my words, my classmates remained silent for a second before bursting into thunderous applause. Instead of feeling embarrassed, I felt deeply honored by my name.

Many classmates approached me after class, their smiles blossoming like flowers. Some asked how to pronounce my name accurately, while others requested that I teach them Chinese. One even asked me to give her a Chinese name. Laughter filled the air as we excitedly discussed Chinese culture—not only names, but also festivals, customs, and more. At that moment, I felt Chinese culture gaining a powerful strength.

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根据优化建议写的作文

In a class discussion, I was invited to explain the meaning of my name. With my heart pounded violently, I stepped onto the stage. I hesitated for a moment. “My name is Qinyu,” I started with butterflies in my stomach which means ‘autumn rain’ in Chinese.” I paused for a second. “It not only refers the natural rain, but also symbolizes for the positive result which the autumn rains bring to us, such as the beautiful scenery various vegetables and the cool weather that contribute us to fade away the heat of the summer. “Then I continued with a tiny smile.” The reason why my parents gave me the name is that they wished I can be a helpful man just like the autumn rain.” Hearing my words. my classmates was in silence, and then boosted into thunderous applause.

Many of my classmates got interested and came up to me after class. They approached me with a smile blossoming like a flower on their face. Some of them asked me how to pronounce my name accurately, while others requested me to teach them Chinese for them. Even a classmate requested me to give her a Chinese name. With laughter echoing in the air, we were excited about talking about the Chinese
culture not just the names but the festival, customs and so on. At the moment, I felt the Chinese culture had gained a powerful strength.