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作文原文（图片转文本）：

Dear Jordon.
During the Spring Festiva vacation I watched a traditional culture folk proformance. Now, I’m writing to illustrate it to you.

    As far as I’m concerned, the program is fruitful and meaningful. What the proformmce involved is ranging from the Beijing Opera to Chinese painting, which broaden my horizons sight and contributes me to immerse in the Chinese culture. Although the program are all excellent, which impress me most was the Beijing Opera. The actors and actresses dressed in Chinese costumes captured my attention and the plot was vivid.

What do yon think about the proform? I’m looking forward to your reply.
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Dear Jordan,

During the Spring Festival vacation, I watched a traditional culture folk performance. Now, I am writing to illustrate it to you.

As far as I am concerned, the program was fruitful and meaningful. What the performance involved ranged from the Beijing Opera to Chinese painting, which broadened my horizons and helped me immerse in Chinese culture. Although the program was excellent, what impressed me most was the Beijing Opera. The actors and actresses dressed in Chinese costumes captured my attention, and the plot was vivid.

What do you think about the performance? I am looking forward to your reply.